Is this any good?

just wondering and how can i improve on it?

well… if i were u i wud start afresh try usuing a bigger stage size and for each box dont use such harsh colours they dont go well together and try to put some alpha on them so they blend easier if u rerally want to use random motion then work with alpha on that as well and make them alot smaller and put them behind the boxes, u will have alpha’d the boxes so they will be transparent so u will see the motion circles behind it

-Tom