Kedika

This is my Macromedia Flash site. I made the navigation myself. The site hosts my flash animations.

www.kedika.s5.com

Right off the bat, your site needs a lil more color, its so dark. The text and color you’re using for your navigation is really hard to see so when I clicked on something, I didn’t noticed right away that the menu changed. You gotta work on the navigation a bit more. Aslo your content seems unorganized as if you just opened up the html document and just started typing. Try laying it out in a table or something to make clean instead of being scattered. Just work on it a bit more. =)

btw, I was looking at your stick figure animations and they’re hilarious, but not as good as the originals by XIAO XIAO. But sure are funny. :stuck_out_tongue:

Too dark

Extremely difficult to read, could barely make out the navigation and content text. Needs a lot more contrast, it’s just way too dark. Sorry I can’t be more positive.