My first pixel art .. criticism appreciated!

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Hi all, this is my first piece of pixel art… please give any constructive comments/criticisms/tips that I could do to make this piece more interesting or better hehe. Hope you all like it! :wink:

Here it is:
http://www.geocities.com/voodoo3blt/pixelart/pixelart.htm

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[SIZE=15]WELCOME SYLINT[/SIZE]
© electrongeek

thats pretty good for your first time! Better than me!

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Wow hehe thanks for the big welcome! =). And thanks hehe I think it could use a little more detail though…

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Well, right off the bat I noticed excellent shading and detail. Kinda tough to tell what is going on with those yellow dots though…

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Ye that is great for a first effort, very nice shading. But if you want some critisism, i don’t think the feet look quite rite, kinda looks like it on tip toes, dunno mite just be me, and i agree with morse about the yellows bits

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Yes, very good. I’d change the perspective a bit for more drama, but it is pixel art after all. :slight_smile:

–EP

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over all very very good for yer first piece. i mean it could use a pit detail and it is a little small but thats it! i like it :A+: and welcome!

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i like it a lot, post more when you get 'em!

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Its good but its not REALLY pixel art,
most pixel art is isometric
e.g.

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but yeah
otherwise its really good