My site

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Hi y’all

A couple of weeks ago I just felt like making my own site, but I wanted it to be more than HTML. So I Flashnetized it. It’s in dutch but I’m working on an English version. Could you give me some feedback to improve my site ? Visit my site here .You can e-mail me at voetsjoeba@voetsjoeba.tk.

PS if .tk doesn’t work click here

Thx, Voetsjoeba

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look around and see other sites on here and get inspired… flash is a great way to show off animations and imgry… u site needs more imgry… think about it… and the site shape reminds me of soemthign else if i find the site ill repost…

*edit http://www.pixelranger.com/

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I especially like your content :crazy: particularily your full games section hehehe not that i advocate that kind of stuff

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Ok i tried to be original :-\ but obviously everything has been done before. You said I should ‘get inspired’ by other sites. but i don’t want to, i wanna have my own interface (which obviously fialed since pixelranger already has this design ) Just love pixelranger by the way, great site. So what ru suggesting specifically ?

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Wow, you still have a lot of work to do, here are some suggestions:

  1. Your splash page is too broing looking, you have a cool flash animation above, but you have these dull looking javascript buttons at the bottom. I would change those to text links or use some simple graphics that relate to the theme or color scheme of the site.

  2. I would change the font to something like arial or verdana as well to make it look cleaner.

  3. As for you layout, the shape of it reminds me of pixelranger’s site layout, but that’s probably coincedental. You really need to work on your layout, it’s really messy, the text is blurry, the text buttons are boring. Plan things out next time and pay attention to detail. What you have now has a lot of negative unused space that isn’t necessary.

Good luck with your next site. =)

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Ok, thx for the advice

  1. I know, but those buttons use JavaScript code for fullscreen mode which i really can’t insert into Flash. I use this fullscreen script :

  2. That layout font IS Verdana

  3. Yeah, parabol noticed that too. All the designs are already done so it’ll always look like something … And for those text buttons, I’m working on them …html text file