Need advices

talk design
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Hi everyone,

I designed a personel site.But I need u all to visit my site and give me oppinions and advices so that I can imrove it.

Please help me.

The site address is http://www.geocities.com/johnpthomas278/

Please let me know what u think about it .

                       Bye
                                Jonnie:)
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Well, I would like to start off with a nice, “Good Job!” Any site like this is good, because it appeals to the younger audience as well, such as infants, or preschoolers. Kids don’t get enough of that these days.

Second, one thing that would help your site, is to ditch Geocities. Their ads make people shake their head at you, because most people these days aren’t smart enough to know that the host puts them on there, not the webmaster.

Third, just a tad bit more content.

It is very professional looking, and clean, which is nice. Keep up the good work.

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Your banner is very rough. Increase frame speed or add more frames.

I think you did the banner frame by frame. You can just use the motion tool in flash.