Newb logo critique

heya im kinda new to design and i thought if i want to one day make money from designing maybe i should try making a logo

well two minutes l8r here it is;

now that i actually look at it im not too sure about it so whatever critique you give will be appreciated and i wont be offended

BTW its meant to be for a salon or somthin

what can i do to better my designs based on this… err… work