The effect on the text is nice, but everything in behind it looks overdone.
If it’s for a salon, you might want to take a look at the style of the design and the style of the salon. The logo should represent to an extent the salon.
Perhaps part of the problem is that the cat is a little difficult to make out with all the effects going on. For a logo, start with a standard text + image with as few colors as possible, then move onto giving it effects.
Well, I don’t want to crush your dream but to me that logo doesn’t look like you put any thought into it. I mean, if it’s a logo for a salon why use the pixel type? Is this a virtual salon? Also, is it just me or does the brown and black look like dirt? Or maybe those black dots on the comb are headlice. lol
Think about who your target audience is, and try to put yourself in their shoes. Also as for a logo, what you have there is too complex. Keep it simple so the logo is legible at small sizes and in black and white.
Keep plugging away, you’ll get the hang of this stuff.