DeV
1
Did this site for a band on Long Island, New York.
Great band, check out the mp3s we have posted if you want.
Still under some minor construction, but I thought i might as well give it a shot and get some 3rd party criticism. Thank you for checking it out 
-John D. Moran
url: http://www.otiband.com
system
2
not bad, not bad at all
but the peach background with the white text hurts my eyes.
system
3
i like the black graffiti and how itβs cut off.
iβd do away with the pop up site; you should integrate it into the initial page.
i think that the mp3βs should play within flash and not in a pop up media player(like the one thats initially playing).
system
4
do away with the popup and change ur fonts.
nice work 