Page check!

Tell me what you think. dont hold back if it is horriable please tell me. http://alex21212.tripod.com/About_Us.htm

i am 50% done with this page. i still need to add some more things.

Thanks!!

Not much to comment unfortunately… But I like the colors! :beam:

Hey,

Nice work. How about left justifying About Us text.
It looks strange it being in a column format with centered text.

thanks for the feedback.

i am going to be adding som more things there and i will upload it when that part of my site is done.

its only 10% done:(

any other comments??:beam:

To be brutally honest with you I think you posted too early. You don’t appear to have done anything in the last 24hrs. If you work on it some more than post when you have quite a bit more content, I’m sure people will be glad to help [IMHO]. :-\

the page is done now. i think
please some one check it out and tell me how bad it is. the link is on the first post of this thread

thanks

Hmm…
There seems to be not much difference 10% and 100%. IMO
It looks like just a BASIC layout with plain colors…

You should definitely add graphics, more content, bigger layout, menu , etc.

You’re starting your page from about us., but you should have a main page with a menu - and from that menu you should point to about us. A Splash page will be nice too.

Overall there’s not much content to comment on.
You just need to put some more time and effort into it.

:smirk:

thats only one page… i am still working on all the other pages