Please critique my visual design portfolio

Hi all,

I’m a passionate visual designer from Amsterdam with more than 8 years of experience.

About a year ago I decided to start working as a freelancer. I frequent most of the necessary social media such as LinkedIn, Twitter, Behance, Elance, Freelance.nl etc., but I’m finding it a challenge to find jobs and get hired.

So I was wondering, would you hire me if you saw my portfolio?

Is there anything I can do to improve my chances?

Thanks in advance!

Kind regards,

Leoni