Portfolio site Design again

talk design
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Just want some comment again on the general design here.

Before:

After:

click to see (it’s already stuffed in an swf, hence …)

I had some hard time putting the slogan somewhere decent as it was found too “squashed” on the first design. Better now? … [size=1]please? ;)[/size]

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The second design is looking better. I dont like how the slogan is going across the curve. Maybe try putting the slogan on the redish curve and than it can symbolize “the path of the mind”. :}

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I agree, the second does look better. :pleased:

Why not place the slogan directly underneath the logo?
And then stretch it out so that it spans the width of the logo.

No, on second thought I think it looks fine the way it is.