Rip This Layout to Shreds, Please

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I’m not a good designer by any means, and I know it. So I need you guys, my buddies on KirupaForum, to rip this apart, nitpick, do everything you can. It’s a first draft (no color yet). Tell me what I need to change, what really sucks pathetically, whether I need to completely rework it, etc.

It’s a personal project, and honestly I have no eye for design :stuck_out_tongue:

Here’s the Layout:

Thanks =)