School Project: magazine cover, would really like comments

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So, I am in a very amateur digital media class at my school. Every project I have ever done has been extremely nice (so say’s my teacher and peers), so I thought “Why not show kirupa?”. Ok, this is a magazine cover each student had to do. It had guidelines and a rubric to follow. Anyways, we had to choose an adjective that describes us and make that our title. and go from there. We also had to have a picture of ourselves. So I bring you this: (would love to have comments and critiques, thx!)

NOTE: image is at 200 dpi, it will be shown as scaled:

http://www.fadedelement.com/school/cover_creative.jpg

Second draft: http://www.fadedelement.com/school/cover_creative2.jpg

Thanks again.

Thanks again.

~Philip