Site Check Please


Some critique on this site that I have made for my downloadable Java game for mobile phones. The link is


simple yet effective, I like it. The only thing that I’d do is make the text slightly larger. Overall good job. I didn’t see the game up yet, is it done? Will it be free? You may want to think about putting information like that up, maybe a FAQ.

yea i like it… not to sure about the logo in the top right corner looks abit out of place but other then that it is decent… keep up the good work

Nice design, some transitions from section to section would be nice. The artwork looks nice and some the effects applied to the images are good. Good work keep it up.

I like it, simple to use and navigate. where did you get the font? the cartoon book look. I’ve been wanting this font for ages.