Someone... anyone... am I in the right track?!

Hello!!
I just finished my first dynamic flash site…
It’s an online magazine…
I would love to hear you comments and opinions about it!!!
The site is in spanish, and all the text right now is for testing purposes only.

Here it is: ENTER

Thanx!!! :slight_smile:

Looks like a good start so far, but I think you should work on the transition effects a bit more so that it will look smoother.

Right now those panels disappear then slide in, you should make it slide back in and then slide back out when things are clicked.

Great start, I like the background image and for that reason I dont like the fact that your boxes are full gray, maybe making it a bit transparent like 70% could make a big difference in your visuals!

good luck

Yep good lookin man,
colors are great2see …and skill is well represented.
The only thing i could say, there is a empty feeling sometimes with ur transitions…

But that’s allgood anyway…

Congratulations

Hi!

This is looking great. I like the background colour and the design, the movie on the buttons.

By the way, how did u create the design in the bg i.e lines?

I designed the background (lines) using Adobe Illustrator. I just did the lines and then exported the whole thing to Flash MX directly from Illustrator.

Ok! I took in all your suggestions and made some changes…
You have to clear your internet cache to see the changes. Umm… why do you think this is happening? Is it my site or the server where it’s at???
Anyways, let me know whatever changes you think I should consider.
By the way, how much can I charge someone for doing a page like this?

Thanx a lot!!

ENTER

Much better :slight_smile:

The cashing part is in your broswer, if u go to temporary internet files = automatic! that should do it, so you dont have to clean your cashe. I like the fact you change ur boxes, now instead of opening them from one place, as u dont have many buttons try opening transitions from oposite directions, just to make it a bit different.

you charge a client depending on how long it took you and how the page looks, I dont think that your page is completed to that point where you can ask this question! ( Add splash page + Add Intro )

hope that helps

peace

anyone else has anything to say?!!
:slight_smile:

I just did a splash for the site… the site is at 1024 x 768 px (just in case). I would like to know what y’all think 'bout it!!!
The new link is: http://home.coqui.net/vchile69/indexsonoesfera.html

Thanx!!! :thumb:

If that was for my site then I would flip that grid thing upside down and tuck into the upper left corner of the page. =)

electrongeek… can I assume by that reply that you liked it?
:slight_smile: hehe

Thanx!!