Take a look

Do you like it???

[URL=http://www.geocities.com/davidkex]

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Rev:elderly:

I love the design but not at all orignal i am sorry, the navigation was a mystery to me

nice clock

Nice but not origonal. Also your menu kept disapering. Why?

It looks very nice it just has a lot of elements from other sites. Small chunks of text, arrows, Flowers these are all very common

how should I improve the design?

The desing is very nice. We don’t mean it is bad at all it is a great site. Maybe reduce some of the grey space in yuor menu(unless u plan on having something show up there). I don’t no. I like the site a alot it just has the same look as a lot of other sites. It is just very trendy but there is nothing wrong with that. It is your site so it is up to u how it should look. We just provide our opions but that dosn’t mean we are right. It is your site so your opion is all that matters. If u like it then I wouldn’t change a thing because it does look and work very nice :slight_smile:

Well I’ll give you credit for having a clean layout, but it still has a long way to go as far as having bugs fixed. I dont know if its just me, but I cant seem to click on your nav at all and I can’t turn on the music on either. You still have your hands full on this one, but it should turn out well, carry on. =)

Yeah, I can’t seem to go anywhere either. Plus I’m having trouble reading some of the text. Maybe the grey is too light for the white to show up properly?

Other than that, it’s a nice looking site. Just a shame it doesn’t seem to do more yet. It took a very long time to load though, and my PC is <i>fast</i>.