Hey ppl,
I submitted this before, but the javascript launch wasn’t working for most, this should be fixed now plus more complete in general.
I am very grateful for any feedback, but I already know that I need to get an ad-free server, just getting the cash together.
Thanks, link:
the.driven
I think you have a very conceptual layout here and it has potential, but as for professionalism and a clean look, I think it could use a lil more work.
First off, I don’t know what you have a layout in a pop-up window, pop ups makes your site less attractive so you might want to have it just regular or atleast give the user the option of having it pop-up or regular.
Your navigation is really cool with the sliding thingy, but the text on it is a bit bg for my taste I also noticed you used a serif style font for your content which doesn’t go well with your layout, I think a san serif stylie font like arial or verdana would be more suitable and maybe reduce the size don’t a notch or two would look better too.
That ball that could be tossed around is a nice touch, it adds a bit of interactivity to your layout so that’s cool, but I don’t like the red ring around it, I think it would look better with out it.
And last, I think you should add in some transitional effects between the sections so when a user clicks on something it will be a smoother transition instead of just jumping back and forth.
Good luck and I hope you’ll post your work again. =)
i like the effects, good job. and you should change the font from times new roman to something else-
-Happy Flashin’:cowboy:
Thanks for your input guys.
eGeek:{think I should take note since you just won SOTW congrats}
I’ll take all your comments under consideration(and probably use them all) and maybe post back once I’ve improved things a little.
Thanks again.
I like the background very much, it’s well done, but I don’t like that ball thinggy. I don’t think it brings much to the site :-\
Also, as EG said, you should work a bit on the way you present your texts.
pom <:}
I got about 4 - 5 pop up windows when I opened it up, so if there’s any way you can get rid of those…
It’s not your fault - I know adverts are a problem on some places like geocities etc…
the link appears broken to me :-\
Not bad. Liked the menu but hated the text used and make it smaller. The ball thing was neat but it got in the way of the scroll bar when i tried to click it. I would maybe thing about a differnt background as well. Popup window bad…Embeded HTML page good. All and all a nice start.
Thanks for the tips all.
sintax: the reason it’s not embedded in an html page just now is so that I don’t have a banner ad. across the top, they can’t put it on the swf…not ideal I know but…
split opinion on the ball though, maybe if I can incorporate it into the page transitions it can serve some kind of purpose as well as being a pointless toy.
once again thanks for your time.
Ya that would be cool. You could also put an on/off butto nfor the ball some where. If some one gets sick of it or it gets i nthe way they can just turn it off.
Great idea, an on/off hadn’t even occurred to me. I think I might be an idiot. thanks Sintax.
Hey thats what I’m here for(-:
got to come up with a good idea once in a while
