Hi! this is tshirt design for non profit org that wants to promote eco tourism. their logo is a “sandal”.
the concept is, with every step, u get to go to beautiful islands.
what do u guys think about it. is it clear? how can it be improved?
thanks!
[COLOR=#333333]http://www.freewebs.com/mindful1983/critique/ytrip1.jpg[/COLOR]
this is the original
[COLOR=#333333]http://www.freewebs.com/mindful1983/critique/ytrip2.jpg[/COLOR]
this is with water.
:rocker:
![[COLOR=#333333]http://www.freewebs.com/mindful1983/critique/ytrip1.jpg[/COLOR]](http://www.freewebs.com/mindful1983/critique/ytrip1.jpg){kind=link}
![[COLOR=#333333]http://www.freewebs.com/mindful1983/critique/ytrip2.jpg[/COLOR]](http://www.freewebs.com/mindful1983/critique/ytrip2.jpg){kind=link}