it’s ok but it’s really corporate (agree with SPAD3S) at first glance I thought you may have been selling something so my first instinct would be to run
It looks fine but I’d be tempted to add another colour rather than just grey/silver. I’d also try to add some personality to it, it’s a bit sterile and, repeating this but, corporate…try adding some of your own personality to it, just some minor touches to humanise it
not a bad start though :afro:
