Hey! It’s been more than a month… possibly two, since I’ve posted for critiques on my up and coming portfolio/blog.
I last entered here with draft #8, but with insightful comments I went back to the drawing board and started on #9. But all in all, I was not pleased with it, and decided not to post it here. Instead, I gave myself some time to think and reviewed it on my own time. Feel free to look at the progression:
Now with 9c coming along well, I wanted to post it here for a critique. I have two variations, one with the logo and [URL=“http://www.fadedelement.com/_wip/faded_element/faded_element_draft_9c.jpg”]another without it.
Honestly, I feel that the title text and/or logo is weak and could improve. I will be focusing on that part soon, please give any tips if you’ve got 'em.
That’s it! Thanks for taking the time to review my site, I look forward to your feedback.
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![one with the logo and [URL=“http://www.fadedelement.com/_wip/faded_element/faded_element_draft_9c.jpg”]another without it](http://www.fadedelement.com/_wip/faded_element/faded_element_draft_9c_logo.jpg){kind=link}