Wren's Birkenstock, Inc. - WIP UPDATE - please critique!

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OK, I posted the first draft of this WIP a day or two ago. You people wanted updates, so here’s your update. :slight_smile:

First Draft: http://fadedelement.com/wbi/main.html

Second Draft: http://fadedelement.com/wbi/main_2.html

I’d love some comments/critiques on which is better, and if I’m headed in the right direction. If anyone has some ideas for ways to implement color, please do! I’ve tried and struggled, but it just wasn’t working.

I’ll try and get an HTML version up soon. Thanks in advance. :smiley:

~Philip