YO! Critique this poster eh?

Yep, you take it out of the box, plug in the power cord, plug in the USB cord, listen for the Windows XP Bonging noise and poof, you have a second, or third, or fourth (and so on) hard disk :slight_smile:

cg you know when you portray a ghost or a scary image like its larger than life and is looking down from a high area, the perspective im thinking of is when you take a photo of a object from the base looking up to its top, it gives it a larger than life kinda look, you know what i mean? what i was thinking of was give the pins that look with the same style you gave the text but as a black silouette.

like the attack of the pins kinda theme.

OOOOO. I gottcha soulty! < insert winky > I think that’s a great idea and I’ll definitely play around with it before I send it off.

Thanks

Btw bowling is such a boring industry to design for. I mean really. Between bowling and real estate I think real estate has an edge. :evil2: :evil2: :evil2:

no probs, post what you come up with. :wink:

CG… Real Estate… oh I’m so glad someone else knows my pain…

I really like this poster. The only thing I don’t think is perfect is the text at the bottom. It seems sort of plain. Sort of like the step-child that has to stay inside the car while the real kids get to go bowl and eat 99cent hotdogs.

Maybe you could do that lettering like a movie poster. Alternating font sizes and such.
P.S. I think you’ve grown too cool for Canada. Time to move south.

cg - great work - maybe move the text up a little and make the logo bigger? seems to be some extra space at the top -

speaking of top…

top notch work.

Thanks Ethan. Yea the font is plain. This sucker is officially done now though 'cause I sent it off before I checked in here.

Btw Ethan you can never be too cool for igloos and eskimos.:pleased:

lol PR I’ve been waiting for someone to point that out. It was a real pain just to move the text up half an inch and I was tired. It’s funny how design balance works because originally when I didn’t have 99 cents at the top it looked fine.

Looks good CG, I’m feelin it GJ. I like the difuse glow, works real well w/ that image. Only problem I have is all those lines in the text, I see what you were tryin to do but I think it would be stronger if they weren’t there, IMO. Very nice though.

I should start putting my critique stuff in here in D&D LoL, it’s like pulling teeth to get a critique in S&C.

lol. Simplistik I always thought that S&C was for websites. Your work is awesome from what I’ve seen. If you’re hard up for a critique go ahead and pm me when you start a thread.

As for the lines. lol. Definitely not my best scratch effect.

yeah i think we scare the people in showcase - things are at like 105 views with 11 comments…

maybe it’s because our work leaves them

speechless?

muahahahaha

99cents? 5 dollars?

already mentioned :P, read above :stuck_out_tongue_winking_eye:

Hey bombing I replaced the old picture ^^^^ seeing as they liked it so much they wanted me to make it a flyer as well. You can see the noise effect way better on this one.

ooh, that’s cool, I like how you have it throughout the flyer/poster rather than just the text, it certainly makes it cooler…

this certainly is top notch :slight_smile:

LoL, thx… I’m never “hard up” for a critique, I just like creative feedback, maybe something I didn’t do that could be done… w/e. You should lounge around S&C now and again, yea i got 74 or so view on my thread and only 4 replys or soemthing like that. I think from now on though I’ll post here in D&D.

I was looking at the flyer, and the noise seems real extreme now, when you look at it as a whole. I almost thought it looked better a little more subtle, and knocked back. Eh, I dunno that’s my .02

cries out in agony MY EYES! O GOD MY EYES! I CAN’T BELIEVE WHAT I’M READING!

Don’t like the noise eh? < yosemite sam voice > OOOO them’s fightin’ words < / yosemite sam voice > lol

I really really dig the noise. I mean I’d marry the noise on this piece if I could. lol

Seriously though, I’m going to check out S&C right now and I’d better not find any noise in any of your work. hehe

I like it more this way :P, don’t you worrry about that noise

i think the noise looks good, just weird when its shrunk down lilke that, (i mean when its printed, it will probably look a lot different, and better). What is up with the www.playtimebowling.com, that just looks wierd, i like just plain white text personally…

o and simplistik, do have links to any of your work… i mean all ur sites just have splash pages, do you have anywork i could see (battles, sites, print, etc.)? Sorry for being off topic.

looks like a movie poster or somthin