OOOOO. I gottcha soulty! < insert winky > I think that’s a great idea and I’ll definitely play around with it before I send it off.
Thanks
Btw bowling is such a boring industry to design for. I mean really. Between bowling and real estate I think real estate has an edge. :evil2: :evil2: :evil2:
CG… Real Estate… oh I’m so glad someone else knows my pain…
I really like this poster. The only thing I don’t think is perfect is the text at the bottom. It seems sort of plain. Sort of like the step-child that has to stay inside the car while the real kids get to go bowl and eat 99cent hotdogs.
Maybe you could do that lettering like a movie poster. Alternating font sizes and such.
P.S. I think you’ve grown too cool for Canada. Time to move south.
Thanks Ethan. Yea the font is plain. This sucker is officially done now though 'cause I sent it off before I checked in here.
Btw Ethan you can never be too cool for igloos and eskimos.:pleased:
lol PR I’ve been waiting for someone to point that out. It was a real pain just to move the text up half an inch and I was tired. It’s funny how design balance works because originally when I didn’t have 99 cents at the top it looked fine.
Looks good CG, I’m feelin it GJ. I like the difuse glow, works real well w/ that image. Only problem I have is all those lines in the text, I see what you were tryin to do but I think it would be stronger if they weren’t there, IMO. Very nice though.
I should start putting my critique stuff in here in D&D LoL, it’s like pulling teeth to get a critique in S&C.
lol. Simplistik I always thought that S&C was for websites. Your work is awesome from what I’ve seen. If you’re hard up for a critique go ahead and pm me when you start a thread.
As for the lines. lol. Definitely not my best scratch effect.
Hey bombing I replaced the old picture ^^^^ seeing as they liked it so much they wanted me to make it a flyer as well. You can see the noise effect way better on this one.
LoL, thx… I’m never “hard up” for a critique, I just like creative feedback, maybe something I didn’t do that could be done… w/e. You should lounge around S&C now and again, yea i got 74 or so view on my thread and only 4 replys or soemthing like that. I think from now on though I’ll post here in D&D.
I was looking at the flyer, and the noise seems real extreme now, when you look at it as a whole. I almost thought it looked better a little more subtle, and knocked back. Eh, I dunno that’s my .02
i think the noise looks good, just weird when its shrunk down lilke that, (i mean when its printed, it will probably look a lot different, and better). What is up with the www.playtimebowling.com, that just looks wierd, i like just plain white text personally…
o and simplistik, do have links to any of your work… i mean all ur sites just have splash pages, do you have anywork i could see (battles, sites, print, etc.)? Sorry for being off topic.
anywho, I’ve got lots of stuff I just don’t advertise. I put my stuff up in S&C if you just want to look at some of my posts. most of my portfolio is for Reebok which I’m under a NDA. But DDD can vouch for me too
As for the noise, yea… sorry :(. I may start a thread in S&C and dedicate it to a image I do w/ all noise :). I did notice something else, is there a slight dropshadow under the words? If so I like that, makes it pop off the design, and makes it look better, if not must be my eyes, and maybe you should think about a dropshadow, LoL.
I think the movie poster looks is what he was goin for
lol mlkdave for the record I didn’t create that website.
Yea there is a slight drop shadow on the lettering. The $0.99 was created after finishing the freaky friday lettering and if you look closely you can see I had some trouble matching them up.
I remember seeing some of your reebok work and it was really cool.