YO! Critique this poster eh?

99cents? 5 dollars?

already mentioned :P, read above :stuck_out_tongue_winking_eye:

Hey bombing I replaced the old picture ^^^^ seeing as they liked it so much they wanted me to make it a flyer as well. You can see the noise effect way better on this one.

ooh, thatā€™s cool, I like how you have it throughout the flyer/poster rather than just the text, it certainly makes it coolerā€¦

this certainly is top notch :slight_smile:

LoL, thxā€¦ Iā€™m never ā€œhard upā€ for a critique, I just like creative feedback, maybe something I didnā€™t do that could be doneā€¦ w/e. You should lounge around S&C now and again, yea i got 74 or so view on my thread and only 4 replys or soemthing like that. I think from now on though Iā€™ll post here in D&D.

I was looking at the flyer, and the noise seems real extreme now, when you look at it as a whole. I almost thought it looked better a little more subtle, and knocked back. Eh, I dunno thatā€™s my .02

cries out in agony MY EYES! O GOD MY EYES! I CANā€™T BELIEVE WHAT Iā€™M READING!

Donā€™t like the noise eh? < yosemite sam voice > OOOO themā€™s fightinā€™ words < / yosemite sam voice > lol

I really really dig the noise. I mean Iā€™d marry the noise on this piece if I could. lol

Seriously though, Iā€™m going to check out S&C right now and Iā€™d better not find any noise in any of your work. hehe

I like it more this way :P, donā€™t you worrry about that noise

i think the noise looks good, just weird when its shrunk down lilke that, (i mean when its printed, it will probably look a lot different, and better). What is up with the www.playtimebowling.com, that just looks wierd, i like just plain white text personallyā€¦

o and simplistik, do have links to any of your workā€¦ i mean all ur sites just have splash pages, do you have anywork i could see (battles, sites, print, etc.)? Sorry for being off topic.

looks like a movie poster or somthin

I have a logo sheet (about 1/10 or less of all my work) and what not that I put together for 2 ppl that wanted to battle me:
http://www.beyondthepixel.com/images/samples.jpg

some other stuff Iā€™ve done Iā€™ve posted here b4:
http://www.beyondthepixel.com/images/toi_new.jpg
http://www.beyondthepixel.com/images/Not_the_Knoll.jpg
http://www.beyondthepixel.com/clients/flashskinz
http://www.beyondthepixel.com/clients/flashskinz/main.html <ā€“under cont.

anywho, Iā€™ve got lots of stuff I just donā€™t advertise. I put my stuff up in S&C if you just want to look at some of my posts. most of my portfolio is for Reebok which Iā€™m under a NDA. But DDD can vouch for me too :slight_smile:

As for the noise, yeaā€¦ sorry :(. I may start a thread in S&C and dedicate it to a image I do w/ all noise :). I did notice something else, is there a slight dropshadow under the words? If so I like that, makes it pop off the design, and makes it look better, if not must be my eyes, and maybe you should think about a dropshadow, LoL.

I think the movie poster looks is what he was goin for

lol mlkdave for the record I didnā€™t create that website.

Yea there is a slight drop shadow on the lettering. The $0.99 was created after finishing the freaky friday lettering and if you look closely you can see I had some trouble matching them up.

I remember seeing some of your reebok work and it was really cool.

S&C really is dead. Itā€™s a shame when such nice work doesnā€™t get commented on http://www.kirupaforum.com/forums/showthread.php?p=579543#post579543

Nice Work CG,
just the text located on the bottom, is to impacted. But otherwise awsome work :slight_smile:

i say that CG, Simplistik, MLK, Ethan, and I form some sort of Coalition for somethingā€¦something having to do with artā€¦

whoā€™s with me

:stuck_out_tongue:

Do we have a secret handshake? If so Iā€™m in.

I think the more important question isā€¦ do we get donations?

yes we do have a secret handshake - it looks like a laser show - you see we have to hold our optical mice(get one if you dont have one) while doing it

donations? hmmmā€¦ i like your thinking.

I donā€™t know PR? Iā€™m sooo busy with my duties as K-Team Non-Affiliated Cult Member 6 // Senior Mountie Soul Reaper. lol

You can imagine how busy I get being the leader of that cultā€¦ pure exhaustion.

PR. Iā€™m laser shaking your hand right nowā€¦ wooo

mmm do they haveā€¦

lasers in their mouses?

*soulty i see you!!!

you are in too bud!