Your Criticism Please

Hey all,

I have put a little time into a banner for my boss. It’s for an engineering and consultanting firm. So it can’t be too wild. I did it in GIMP. I usually use Fireworks or PS, but he doesn’t have either here at the office and I refuse to do this at home. Please let me know what you think. All criticism will be taken into consideration. I’m a newbie so please don’t hold back. But please offer some suggestions to make it better.

Thanks!

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These are the first two I mocked up.