A little art piece i made in flash

i am still working on this piece. Please comments, suggestions, insults are welcome.

I can’t see it :S

http://beautifultorture.com/art/mind.swf

sorry i forgot the link. my bad guys. lol

no worries :stuck_out_tongue:

Is the art meant to be the preloader? because if it is, its very nice :slight_smile: maybe make it gradually change colours? if the thing it was loading was the art, then you need to compress it better. Many people (like me, Im watching my bandwith, I almost topped my limit last month) can’t wait for that to load :frowning:

the preloader was very nice… it took wayyyyyy to long though. The actual piece was ok I guess, I like how it kept to the beat… but you didn’t change the thing enough, I was almost ready to exit while I watched like dots spin around the same picture for like 30seconds (but I didn’t cuz I wanted to critique it :))

I think it would be a lot better if it was a little more complex and faster paced… but otherwise good job :thumb:

thanks. yeah the compression needs work hardcore. Just wanted to get a general crtique. But yeah i surly want to spice it up some more. I guess when i think about it. It is really just a slide show.

WOO i dont get it O.o hehe

I closed the browser I did not see anything …

I had to wait for ages to see it, but it was pretty good but you should either use less fractals or make the quality on the fractal images better!

if you don’t see anything, maybe try right clicking it and save target as

aha… it’s not huge… it’s enourmous size for flash 12MB :slight_smile:

downloading it… will post you my views when done

Surely looks you did a good amount or work… From your title of the file I am guessing that the title is related with mind… Some of the transitions were ok needed some work… Some images I did not understand in relation to your title… Otherwise nice work… it is slow though… I will say rather than adding more to it, rework some of the issues…

best wishes

Very nice although it takes abes to preload, also where can i send the £2 bill for exceeding my bandwidth limit for the day due to downloading your art? (please warn people that the file is huge!) :smiley:

you have a lot of patience man!

I dont get it…I felt like it was some kind of brainwash, subliminal message thing telling me to go buy a big mac from mc donalds.

what is the purpose of this?

It’s a wicked beat to animate to, and your timing & style really suits it. I would never have waited that long to watch it though unless it were on here. I don’t think you should spend a lot of time tweeking this piece, I say leave it and take what you’ve learnt and start something new. Some elements of it were ace, you should take those on and make something better.

i feel like im on acid or something hehehe. cool work. it kinda seems like its a showreel of your porftolio.

file too large bruv

don’t like it, the pieces are unrefined and difficult to make out, esp on the fractals. Color choice is a bit odd as well looks like 100% c m y k