Alpha and Omega

talk design
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I found this wallpaper floating around the net - I’ve actually seen it a few times, and I thought I would play with it a bit in Photoshop.

Don’t know who the original author is, or if its a screenshot from the game, but first is the original:

And my version:

Well, let me know what you think! :smiley:

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to tell you the truth i like the original, your version is ok, but i think the type of the right is too much, the left is ok but the type is sorta too spaced out and too large in size, i think more kinda cramped up, (like complex code) would give it that more techy/trend feel.

personally i would of added some blur to the background to give it more depth of field and then have some type in a arc shape to the left of that inner eye but either give the type a very soft look to it or to match the confusion or fear on the face of the character i would make the text have a sorta zoom effect… to give it movement and a sense of action. but thats me…

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Hmm.
Good idea, lemme play with it a bit :smiley:

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Hows this look?

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and then have some type in a arc shape to the left of that inner eye

I’m not sure what you meant by this, though…