Another logo check

okay this one is still for that daycare I posted a while back. They have been in business since 1907 and wanted a oldfashioned plus modern look. tell me whatcha think.

this is the existing logo

now that one’s really nice. I only have a few very very minor complaints.

  1. the blue vertical beams in the foreground get cut off from the cropping and make them spikey and sharp. It adds a little bit of tension, especially on the left side where theres another vertical spike from the negative space. Offhand I cant think of a way it can be avoided

  2. The bell looks a lot like a hat. Might be just me :slight_smile:

  3. And probably the biggest: I cant help but think TACO BELL!

Senocular you beat me to it I was just about to say, is that a rip of the Taco Bell logo. :stuck_out_tongue:

Good logo DDD they will like it. :smiley:

hahaha…yeah I think they are aware of the Taco bell thing. The colors are weird because I use used CYMK for print…SO you may not see some colors correctly on a screen thus the hat look. I used Illus 10 and used meshes (oh how I love Illus. now)

Thanks for the comment Sen

I have to agree with the 6 eyed freak… :smiley:

I see Taco Bell bright and shiny…

maybe make the bldg red (little red school house), and mess with those spikes…

Rev

well I pitched it to them…and they loved it. Now I have to redesign their print material :frowning:

good idea rev on the red school house thing. Why in the hell did I not think about it. good thing I am using spot colors. Ill post a red one in a second…

oh yeah wut spikes rev?

as Sen said, the front of the bldg after cropping looks spikey…

that is all…

Rev

here is a red one with Rev’s suggestion and a lil of sen’s if I understood him correctly

I like it a lot better, and for some reason, I don’t get the Taco Bell assoc. so much anymore.

Rev

yes I like it much better also. thanks for the suggestion rev.

That has a kinda colonial feel to it

the red makes it feel more warm and thats important. the blue was almost a bit cold. looks really good though.

*Originally posted by DDD *
**yes I like it much better also. thanks for the suggestion rev. **

no prob…

sometimes theys just comes to me…

:smiley:

Rev

Great work. I like the red one

definitely the red! :thumb:

what happened to the other idea, it was refused?

Did somebody say taco bell?

unflux; yeah basically…they said they were looking for something a lil less modern…I’ll find a use for it somewhere else tho.

less modern? wow ok :h:

I can imagine, “We are looking to update our logo and identity,
but we don’t want anything new or modern.” kinda scary

yes, red looks way better-

great job man!!!