This is just the splash as of yet, but some feedback of what you think would be great.
Thanks,
Danno~
This is just the splash as of yet, but some feedback of what you think would be great.
Thanks,
Danno~
I like the idea of the tree pre-loader. a bit more to go within the animation of leaves falling (another 5 minutes will make it look so much better.) A simplistic format but the colour scheme could do with a re-think. Another 30 mins on the graphics and it wil be sorted.
Scott 
The loader looked sweet. It was smooth and stylish! I could see what they_played_tri was saying about the leaves, that could certainly seal the deal with that. The splash page could possibly use a bit of work. The book was a little overdone with the crinkled up paper look. It almost seemed unnatural. Try to play with the fonts sizes and colors too. Once again, it looks almost unnatural. With a little playing with it I’m shure it could look quite awesome! Keep up the good work, I would like to see what comes of this!
good start
lower the brightness on those book pages, its too harsh, and also the smudge and blur effects on the edges are a bit too much, i like the shape of the book.
and was it me or…on your preloader i saw it unmask the tree, then this little portion on the lower right just “appeared” instead of the smooth mask i had been seeing - maybe it was my eyes this morning.
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