Critique my Site Now!

Hey Kirupians, i was wanting to get some feedback on my site, even though it is incomplete…

My Splash Page

If people could tell me what they like, what they aren’t fond of, what worked, and what didn’t, i would be appreciative…

All feedback and opinions welcome, whether negative or positive…

cool watch! i like the site, nice interaction, nice fonts

its okay, not really my style though… I love the watch though!

Hey could people let me know whether they are critquing the HTML version/the Flash version/or Both. This will help me apply the feedback to the appropriate areas… More feedback would be appreciated… I will even reward your feedback with a Free Photoshop Manipulation of your choosing… just leave the feedback, post two pictures and let me know what you want done. Hopefully this will help me get more feedback.

(this also applies to the two posts above, if they would like)

Peace :slight_smile:

This is my critique for the flash version:

  1. First off, why do you have your footer on your splash page? All it does is load your site again…

  2. Next what I didn’t like was how your content wasn’t layed out consistently, your text would scatter or spaced out differently throughout the sections.

  3. I also didn’t see any “home” link, kinda hard to go back to the home page with out a home link, don’t you thnk?

Now those are the things I didn’t like, here are the things I did like.

  1. The vector watch on your splash page is cool even though it doesn’t go well with the images, but I like it anyways.

  2. Your site is pretty smooth and loads pretty fast so that’s a plus.

Overall I think it’s okay so far, but could use more work so good luck. =)

nice site/s

Flash: ok first, the text seems to be all over the place, maybe with the use of some colour or bold for keywords like Common Name, habits, or personal computer software experiences (which by the way i think is too long just to say programs i know)
you could add less tracking to the type because the left side seems to close to the right. This should be used all through the website to give it a flow.

banner on top dosent seem necessary, feels out of place, and this also goes for "neating arranging 0’s amd 1’s for over two and a … thats dosent seem to be a slogan , some typography is needed there. maybe a italic? maybe put it somewhere else, maybe put it where the banner is or in the banner with a different image.

banners on bottom are fine, i like the zoomin pic, nice smooth tranisitions to it.

Loading text!! everything looks too cramp as it is and then the loading text comes up and makes it even more cramp , i think the loading type should be somewhere else completly, try to place it in the movie, not next to mj, it just seems out of place.

i think thats it for the flash site

Html: nice , this looks great, logo looks open and not squashed, (its got breathing room!) menu is neat and legible, type has been spaced out and well thought out, image on top looks great , i really dont have any problems with this html site, only 2 things i can see, althought its nice work with frames but the scroll bar just kills it , even though some pages dont need the scoll bar the ones that do give it that not compilling with your theme feel, maybe you could change the scroll to suite your website, i ve seen many sites, change the colour of the IE scroll bars.

(remember alot of people still use 800 X 600 resolution , and with that graphic you have on the right, people at that resolution wont c it and the scroll bar will always be needed)

the last thing, black type on grey background can blend to much sometimes, maybe iam being picky, lol (-: but it does looks nice, just seems to blend in with the black a little too much for my liking, other than those 2 and half (half is the graphic of the right frame, goes missing in 1024 X 768 and less)

i like your Html page, much more than the flash page, i hope i gave you some ideas. :smirk:

Thanks for the in depth feedback, it really helps a lot…

I agree with everything that you guys said, it just took someone elses opinion to help me realize it all…

I’m going to make some more changes, and hopefully my site will continue to improve…

(if you want to take me up on the free photo-manipulation, PM me, or let me know in this thread) Thanks again…

Nice job…I really like it.

Keep doin’ like this

Ciao:flower:

BUMP…

I added some new features as well as some subtle changes. Now if i can just get some content… haha

check out my site by clicking below…

Hit me with feedback if you’ve got it…