Desktop critique

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hey i actually did this a few days ago for that “show us your backgrounds” thread, but seeing as i did it i thought i might post it here, if you can think of any way i can improve it tel me k, :ear: im all ears

[url=“http://www.geocities.com/waqkum/newestdesktop.jpg”]

critique remembering that this is for nothing in particular but if u think its any good i might put it in my portfolio when its done thanks

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It’s a nice image, but I think you ought to remove the text… Possible write it with a different font, I don’t think that works as it is.

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i second that, play around with text positioning and fonts a little more

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k thanks guys