hello i’m new. i just made a new site too. its pretty simple. please check it out and tell me your deepest thoughts.
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is there no one on this forum that can give me some constructive criticism?
the site isnt the best…style isnt very stylish and the sounds get quite annoying
The site has a few flaws.
The navigation is pretty hard to use and not that obvious at first. I thought the green circles would be the nav.
Not really sure what the site is about, are you a web designer? musician? photographer?
The music player, when you drag it around, the moiveclip it loads in doesn’t go back to its orginal place, so u can screw up the location of all further pages loaded. You need to reset it position everytime a clip is loaded.
Pop up for gallery is annoying. why can’t it load in the site?
First ever exit page i’ve seen. not too sure if thats good or bad?
Design is relatively out of date. The banner doesn’t make any sense to me at all the rainbow needs some serious work to fly as a rainbow. Thie site would probably work and look better without the rainbow and banner type thing. Just go for text links nav as the graphical side/choice/style needs a lot of work imo.
ok just read the info thing. well the design won’t sell you easily as a web designer so maybe you’ll want to consider how it appears. Do some research into colour thats work together. How you want to sell yourself/brand your website, this usually should be ralated to your work to add some extra weight to it’s relevance. As I said earlier I didn’t know what this site is for. The smallest link tells me you for hire. You need to re evaluate your heirarchy of information big time. As the first text I see is “i hated hearing my phone ring until bee boogie came along.” and as a potential employer I’d have just closed the site…
Also writing “skillz” isn’t cool. just use “skills” I’d also like to see some capital letters where required as the whole no caps culture isn’t working for me here, not very profressional. Sorry to say so much, but there isn’t much i’m convinced with. You did ask for my deepest thoughts, hopefully this is constructive. Think about it harder and I’ll give you some more feedback when you get round to developing it (-:
edit: btw I didn’t have my sound on. Jesus! lose those sounds FAST!
haha. thanks. i really appreciate it. i am not much of a graphic designer (mostly programmer). and this is the first website i have ever built with flash. its really just an experimental personal website for now. next version is going to be more serious.
ps: both of you are closed-minded when it comes to style.
hmm nothing on the page…
Thats a pretty bold statement, which is a pretty low blow after I gave you some solid unbiased criticisim (which you asked for btw)… anyway you have probably never seen our work or discussed our views even if such a thing as sytle exists. In this case its nothing to do with your style or it having no style, the site just doesn’t look good and doesn’t work well as website, thats all. So stop hiding behind the shield of “you don’t understand style” and begin to actually criticise your own practice, before slagging off the people that are trying to help.
ummm, not really. a few extremely wierd shaps embossed like they were designed in 1989 do not create style - good or bad.
umm try to lose that mp3 its from that website http://www.jeroenwijering.com/?item=Flash+Mp3+Player
anyways make your own mp3 player and dont take the free samples and works of those companies. its very unprofessional. i suggest you learn how to make an mp3 from tuts or by seeing how they made it.
y the hell do burgers and hotdogs jump out the white things when u press main? …
where? they don’t for me 
I wanna see the burgers and hotdogs now (-:
lol click on the main and pay close attention to the sides u will see flying hotdogs and burgers flying, it comes out of the mutated white things on the sides.
style is a matter of opinion and as u put ur site up in this forum thats what you wanted, peoples opinion.
…and the majority if not all of the people didnt like the style. I am not a fan of ur site. Some did give u constructive feedback and you shot them down. What exactly do you want? Praise no matter what it is?
My “Opinion”:
Im not keen on the style im sorry. The colours dont flow together. I also thought that the circular images were the buttons. I only found your navigation by accident.
verdict: Needs some tuning.
verdict: Needs some tuning.
thank you for your opinion.
try clicking on the “exit” one, u’ll **** urself
Which one’s exit? I couldn’t see it.
I loved the hamburgers and hotdogs though 
:lol: i see them now!!!
the exit one is the one at the VERY bottom of the rainbow, its purple, uy can barely see it
its not that bad. just needs alot of fine tuning. At least ekimvision took chances with the design aspect.
