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Ok My Site pretty much sucks but can…give me a score from 1-10 juding me as a rookie please…

http//:www.unspoken-truth.net/Shells

just curious, is there a reason you posted in random, rather than site check?

Rev

*Originally posted by reverendflash *
**just curious, is there a reason you posted in random, rather than site check?

Rev **

I’m pretty much new here don’t know all the difrrent sections that well how can i move it?

I’ll move it for you. No prob, that is why I asked…

Rev

*Originally posted by reverendflash *
**I’ll move it for you. No prob, that is why I asked…

Rev **

Thankz alot bro

I will give you * of 10 !

  • Make a preloader !
  • Let the movie load togather !
  • Main menu is small !
  • text is not that clear in about me…etc !

? dont have any more I think !

I like the colors and the sound LOL !:chinaman:

nice work man !

Eminem : :trout: Nice music I like some of his music !

*Originally posted by Blastboy *
**I will give you * of 10 !

  • Make a preloader !
  • Let the movie load togather !
  • Main menu is small !
  • text is not that clear in about me…etc !

? dont have any more I think !

I like the colors and the sound LOL !:chinaman:

nice work man !

Eminem : :trout: Nice music I like some of his music ! **

if i knew how to make a preloader don’t you think i would make one?

http://www.kirupa.com/developer/mx/percentage_loader.htm

*Originally posted by Voetsjoeba *
**kirupa.com - Preloader With Percentage **

Thats really smart I’m not using MX

I’m using FLSH 5 :beam:

bullet:

that search button is truly wonderful:

http://www.kirupa.com/developer/actionscript/preloader.htm

this one is in Flash 4, so I think you should be able to get it to work…

(we’ve been around for a while, so we have quite a few diff tutorials)

Rev

Hey Bullet-Shells , nice technical parts in your site, like the shout out section. Its all pretty good, just a few thing i would like to mention. The looping animations are too much in your face, if they are more subtle, like you could make that circles in the middle into a spinning Vinyl. and the 3 images on the right are annoying , maybe have them stay static and some difference effect on each, or if you were going for that tv static look, make the images move rapidly for a few sconds fading in and out, and add that scan line you have on the top left to the imags, so it looks like a tv losing reception.

::: the scream sound sample on the buttons of the top left are freaky bro, a bit too much for each button.

Maybe try the colour white for your type as well.

:: lose the animated dots on Eminem

Other than that, its pretty nice layout, needs some work, and could be even better.

Ill give you a 5 for now, because i can see alot of thing good but still can be improved.

DUDE WTF IS YOUR PROBLEM!!! :wink: im here by myself 3.13 am and i go o ver those butons, with no music playing and im ****ing startled out of my mind… makes me not want to visit that site anymore… >:( but the rest is ok, i like the shoutbox…

VJ: only constructive criticism please.

The site needs a lot of work. The rollOvers are too loud and annoying, the animation is too busy, no preloader, too much empty space.

*Originally posted by Cheez00 *
**DUDE WTF IS YOUR PROBLEM!!! :wink: im here by myself 3.13 am and i go o ver those butons, with no music playing and im ****ing startled out of my mind… makes me not want to visit that site anymore… >:( but the rest is ok, i like the shoutbox… **

Who gives a flying **** you fat basterd i would love if you not vist my site you fat basterd.

*Originally posted by Jubba *
**The site needs a lot of work. The rollOvers are too loud and annoying, the animation is too busy, no preloader, too much empty space. **

And?.. ****ing idioot if you read what i said up top about me being a rookie only had the program for about 4ms you prick.I BET YOUR PHOTOSHOP skills suck just like your MOM right?

Bullet:

that was uncalled for. Even tho he deserved it, do not lower yourself to that level. People get banned for this kind of thing.

Cheez:

cool it. post constructive comments in a friendly way, or don’t post at all. If you are surfing at 3:00 AM, and don’t want to be shocked by sounds on a webpage, then turn off your sounds… Any more outbursts like the one above, and you could be banned. We are all adults here, behave like one.

Rev

it’s not a bad site.
i must say that the ‘screaming’ links got the entire computer labs attention:)
it’s different, but not really too bad

*Originally posted by Bullet-Shells *
**And?.. ****ing idioot if you read what i said up top about me being a rookie only had the program for about 4ms you prick.I BET YOUR PHOTOSHOP skills suck just like your MOM right? **

Bullet:

appologize to jubba for this. This type of response is not tolerated here, especially towards a mod. If you can’t take the heat, don’t post your work. This is not the place to fish for compliments.

Rev