First ever attempt

Hi, I am new to flash, anyway I know my site is a lot more basic then all the others, and still in construction.
This is my first attempt at a flash site.
You can have a look, i am prepared to be cut to pieces

http://users.tpg.com.au/adslbxl9/

This is all my own work, I made the site today. So it is not as if it took much time.