FourLeaves - Opinions Please

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Okay so I started work on my ‘Portfolio’ the other day and I got to a point where I was like, yeah im happy with what ive got so far but how can I move on from here… Ive thought alot and have a few ideas but I would love the ideas of you KirupaKids to help me.

Here is what I have so far: FourLeaves

Feel free to say whats bad (and more importantly) whats good about what I have and what it needs.

Cheers.
:ear:

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I like it, it’s sleek and stylish. Perhaps it could use a litte color, but I’m sure you could do that with the other pages and stuff. Maybe give the logo a slight greenish tint, that might look good and add a bit of color without overdoing it. I’d really like to see it animated.

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Thanks Wanyo. I will try those things you have mentioned and get back with an updated version. I have other versions which have different colours.

I also forgot to warn people of my rather large face on it. Don’t mean to alarm anyone :D. Hehe.

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hey S.P.-

your footer rocks!!! the site is looking nice and modern. I think that you should contenue your work as is. I like the plane/bland look, and on the point of focus there is a splash of color.

nice:

from, Blake

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star- perhaps just a colored gradient in the background - perhaps a nice soft red?

looks very sleek so far :slight_smile:

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“Made in the U.K.”

He He, I like it!

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i agree with the accent colour… needs a dash to pull something out to the eye and it makes sense if its the logo…

the font is cool, but since i bought one form fonts for flash i could never go back…if you look at ure name its hard to read…

other than that, its a very promising start, your a man after my own heart with the white/minimalist look,

Billy

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Very Nice :slight_smile:

Not sure if your good looking enough to be on the main page though :wink: (j/k)

Only thing I’m not sure about is the border around the interface, it seems rather big. Now I’m on a real crappy computer right now, so maybe that’s why it looks a little funny to me, Ill have to check when I get home.

But nice job I really like it.

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Thanks alot for the comments guys. Im working on the suggestions made. I tried making the logo more green earlier and it didn’t look right but i am going to try again now to see if i can get different results.

Its funny someone mentioned the red gradient, because i tried a red one and it didn’t look all the bad really.

Thanks again.