Haikus anyone?

dessoya · February 12, 2004, 11:43am

anyone has the time to do some haikus?

most popular haiku is probably from fight club:

“workerbees can leave,
even drones can fly away,
the queen is their slave”

altough this is not a real haiku
(a haiku is normaly a sequence of sentences with 5-7-5 syllables)
this is a quite interesting and creative job…

anyone open for haiku?

system · February 12, 2004, 11:53am

so it’s not a haiku because…? I thought something being a haiku relied only on it having 5-7-5 syllables?

system · February 12, 2004, 1:35pm

This is a haiku
with seventeen syllables
I think it is cool.

system · February 12, 2004, 2:16pm

My bird cannot fly
she speaks english very well
her wings have been clipped.

system · February 12, 2004, 2:21pm

I went to the park
and had lost my cheese sandwich
now I can’t find it.

system · February 12, 2004, 3:00pm

This forum has its
Sixteen year olds who really
Piss me off sometimes.

:beam:

system · February 12, 2004, 3:04pm

Fat *** Cartman was
Not on the school bus today
What a big fat ****

Can I say that?

system · February 12, 2004, 3:06pm

No you can’t use that
since it’s not original
please try again, kit.

system · February 12, 2004, 3:07pm

I saw a crowbar
It tasted rusty and old
It needed some salt

:disco:

system · February 12, 2004, 4:25pm

fester found crowbar
slammed it in some dudes neck pipe
limp body hit floor

system · February 12, 2004, 4:30pm

Handed it to phil
to avoid prosecution
went back to the woods

system · February 12, 2004, 5:16pm

My cat eats anything
He once ate a white golf ball
I hope that he dies

system · February 12, 2004, 5:20pm

I’m pretty sure the line’s cannot run on :sure:

system · February 12, 2004, 5:34pm

*Originally posted by fester8542 *
**fester found crowbar
slammed it in some dudes neck pipe
limp body hit floor **
****, you’re twisted.

system · February 12, 2004, 5:40pm

I do not know why
I continue to come here
I think I should stop

:-/

system · February 12, 2004, 5:49pm

system · February 12, 2004, 5:51pm

Whoa, thanks for those rules man …

In the words of Strong Bad: “No idea what were doin. None.”

system · February 12, 2004, 6:12pm

*Originally posted by thoriphes *
******, you’re twisted. **

I try :beam:

system · February 12, 2004, 6:21pm

Pretty blue-gray sky,
Come rain down upon all girls
Wearing white tee-shrits

:thumb:

That’s better! …

system · February 12, 2004, 6:25pm

Stupid ISP
Gives me low speed internet
Country service sucks