I am not the authority of the Web, but since you seemed so eger to receive comments I will make you happy and try and give some constructive criticism. Generally I hate to participate in such a thing. I hate when people make negative comments on my work simply because its not their style or tehy do’t understand it. But after reading your posting I felt that if anything I want to help out.
Here it goes. There is alot of potential in yoru creation, all it needs is some fine tuning.
First of if I were you I would purchase my own domain and get a cheap hosting service if you plan to use this for your magic business.
Logo: I like the logo you have on yoru banner in the…its not as large and looks cleaner in the design, and does not have your face on it as it has on yoru site. If I were you I would use the forum banner logo you have and place that on your site inplace of your current one and make the logo smaller than it is now.
Background…I would make it smoother and less busy. This way your text will come out more.
Full window…my advice is stay away from it…some people liek it but I generally am bothered by it (this is more a personal prefernce I guess).
The main body of your flash site, the design element which your text sits on is beveled…I would unbevel it make it flat in the same style as your buttons are with the ouline and design the text a bit metter and perhaps make the text white if you plan on using such a dark bg color.
Other then that just keep things a bit cleaner overall…and try and stay away from bevels, they only work well in specific situations and then they have to be done really well…trust me i have done some things in photoshop, and they write books about how to do the perfect bevel with the correct lighting so it looks more natural.
Now I know this feedback is somewhat general but I believe with these few pointers you will come closer to your SOTW goal.