Hi Guys!
I have just begun to learn flash. Not much Idea of actionScripts. However I have tried to make my portfolio with the limited knowledge that I have. Please comment, and suggest.
Regards,
Kcalpesh. :cubs:
froze my IE when I hit the ENTER button :-/
dohhhhh!! Must be a popup blocker?:jail: caging the page… anyways… I ll make note to mention about this MORE STRONGLY …on the indexpage.
Thanksss:)
i like it, and for a beginner, its better than what i can do… in fact, i still have not created one single thing… lol
very creative work, and i like the navigation because it is simple, yet at the same time, it is interesting, fast-loading, and different in regards to the look and feel of it. :thumb2:
Sure! ■■■■ good for a begginer! I like some of the Flash section animations
Thanks Guys,
Thats really encouraging…
The functionality is pretty good, but the design is not.
Work on ur design as well.
Great design makes a site a pleasure to visit 
Sure. I ll workout something Better.
i hate full screen popups…
but i like the functionality of the site, i find it good for a beginner;)
nice job:), just modify your layout
Oh Great. I just thought of putting up my artworks created in 3dmax and photoshop, so I learnt flash. I am getting some inspiration from some of the very advanced sites listed in the Kool Sites section. That really gives an idea regarding the possibilities using Flash.
As soon as I work out something I ll put it up for Mah’dear’critics.
Thanks once again guys the suggestions provided by you all…shall prove very helpfull to me. :):)
Verry nice start indeed!
But i think there a lot people like Hybrid, who hate flashsites in a fullscreen popup.
Im not sure you schould use it, why should you? You should use the fullscreen popup thing for those cool experience’s, if you know what i mean… A porfolio should be open for everyone, and the fullscreen thing will scare peolpe** i think…
**Wow wtf, why do i find this realy hard to explain !? … 
Yep, Convinced. I ll make it normal mode.:beam:
That’s pretty good for a beginner. Nice job. I’ll leave the critiques with constructive criticism to the guys/gals above. Keep at it! :thumb:
Yeah. Please criticize with providing a scope for improvement. Thats what has been done in above discussion, already. I think that could prove to be a great help for beginners like me.
Thanks.
better than my first attempt
Having it in full screen like that **greatly **decreases the usability of the site, IMO. I would only even consider it, if it was absolutely necessary; in this case it’s not. Look at all the wasted space. Other than that, its an ok start!
Some of have been mentioned, but my 2 cents:
1- Lose pop up, no need for a site this small in size.
2- Maybe add an more animated rollover on you buttons, at least use a more appealing colour, the brown seems a bit wrng next to your greys…something to give it a punch
3- the text “portfolio” needs to be centralised on your splash page.
4- Not too keen on some of the elements you use in the background, they kinda distract me, personally it would look better without them, to me they don’t really add much to the site or work and just draw your eye away.
5- Way too many fonts and sizes too. Try top stick to two fonts and two sizes, one for titles, one for text. This will improve the consistency between sections.
Good for a first site, just needs a bit of slickening up IMO
i would go for flash fonts… smaller and prettier… just use google to search for flash fonts or pixel fonts… you’ll find a lot of free fonts
yeah the fonts need some attention
good start for a flash n00b though :thumb2: keep it up!
n like you said, looking at kool sites will give you a great deal of inspiration
True, These are a few things that dont come to mind very easily…but thank god I am not way toooo far away from track. Thanks a lot… I shall really consider every thing… and move on to the ammendments on the current thing…
