Hi. please be honest about my site :)

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Hi,
I am new to kirupa’s forum but i’ve been reading tutorial for a while now.
I made myself a simple flash site. I want it to remain simple but most of all I want it to be bug free and not too ugly:beam: .

So if you have the time check it out and tell me what you think

www.libroed.ro (do not mind the language) :stare:

See you.

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not bad for a beginner, BUT, this site would server its purpose better as a static HTML and CSS site.

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love police is right - because this site has no real Flash, it’s an unnecessary use of it. It’s not bad, but it could be much nicer in HTML.

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i agree with the posts above, no use for making this in flash. It would be better in html;)

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This 100% doable without the need of flash. Some nice css, html and maybe some php will do the trick- and it will look much cleaner, and be easier to manage :slight_smile:

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^Agreed

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yeah, the design is real clean. but i wouldn’t have known this was in flash at all…

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I agree with earlier post. No reason to this in flash when you can do the same job in html. Nice work though. Add some effects etc.

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I know someone said this already, but this site would be better served as a html/css site. I like the colors tho and the layout is not bad, but it seems to be kinda disjointed right now.

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Yeah. For this project you should clearly go with some plain Html / Css site.
But it’s ok, as others said, for a begginer.
Tell me. Is there anything dynamic in it?
And why have you choosen flash? Only to learn? Was that a project/client’s request? I’m curious.

PS. What’s wrong with the language :bandit: ?

Later Edit: Lol - Has anybody mentioned it yet that this was better in HTML :D?? Lmao.

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I agree to. It would be no use for Flash but… I hate Dream Weaver. I just hate it, it is unnatural to use.
And I do not have the patience to write a site just from code :x .
Thanks for the critique.

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Whaaa!!? DW is not bad at all… give it a try, you’ll see. :cowbell:

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yeh dreamweaver is awesome, and i mainly use dreamweaver in code view. and if you dont have the patience to write a site just using code, then you really shouldnt be making sites at all… :stuck_out_tongue: :smiley:

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everyones right about the html thing just put the flash objects on the page dont mke everything flash. needs more style aswell

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…you know you could have used html/css for this? :beer:

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:lol:

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:pleased: well at least the post became a funny one.
I guess i will give DW a chance after all.:azn:

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using flash is always the easy route.Not as much work as coding in html and css.Probably would have done the same myself but I like animation too much.Should have maximised flash’s capabilities

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I have to ask what with this link in your site

http://www.libroed.ro/modelebannere.html

are you the one who made
it seems to be a intro

truth be told its ugly

even when i started i never made anything that horrid

PS. I’m not a good designer, not at all but that intro OMG

and the site it goes to

http://www.gtsturism.ro/

idea noted but who ever should have used better images and blended the whole page alot better

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when i enter to teh web
i love the round corner effect at the center of the web
but
the bottoms are like square border, and i think you should make everything with the same style
perhaps you can use some glow effects (not in a abusive way) and try to use some roll over effects with transitions
and the color…mmm i dont know
its good, but i dont like it at all
try with other gamma colors
its a good site, but you can make ir better

keep like that