Hoax emails, bad grammar

for those living in australia, you will know this bank. note the grammar. i made [COLOR=Red]bold red[/COLOR] corrections below…

[LEFT][FONT=Verdana][SIZE=2]Our records indicate that you recently added or made a change to one of your email address(es) and Bell Potter was added to your BPAY payment for **[COLOR=Red]a [/COLOR]new payment from another IP address which is different from your personal IP address.[/SIZE][/FONT][/LEFT]
[FONT=Verdana][SIZE=2]As part of our security measures,
[COLOR=Red][space here][/COLOR]**we have [COLOR=Red]t[/COLOR][COLOR=Red]o [/COLOR]terminate[COLOR=Red]d[/COLOR] [COLOR=Red][one or the other][/COLOR] your online banking account untill [COLOR=Red][no double ‘l’ in “until”][/COLOR] when [COLOR=Red][is when necessary here?][/COLOR] you will restore the access because of the **[COLOR=Red]un[/COLOR]**authorized changes.
[FONT=Verdana][SIZE=2][FONT=Verdana][SIZE=2]Kindly use the link below to restore account access with Commonwealth bank,
Please click here:
[/SIZE][/FONT][FONT=Verdana][SIZE=2][COLOR=#003399]https://www3.netbank.commbank.com.au/netbank/bankmain [/COLOR][/SIZE][/FONT][/SIZE][/FONT]
[FONT=Verdana][SIZE=2][FONT=Verdana][SIZE=2]Thank You.[/SIZE][/FONT][/SIZE][/FONT]
[FONT=Verdana][SIZE=2][FONT=Verdana][SIZE=1]Accounts Management As outlined in our User Agreement, Commonwealth Bank of Australia ® will
periodically send you information about site changes and enhancements. [/SIZE][/FONT][/SIZE][/FONT]
[FONT=Verdana][SIZE=2][FONT=Verdana][SIZE=1]Visit our Privacy Policy and User Agreement if you have any questions.
[/SIZE][/FONT][FONT=Verdana][SIZE=1][COLOR=#003399] http://www.commbank.com.au/SecurityandPrivacy/default.asp[/COLOR][/SIZE][/FONT][/SIZE][/FONT]