This is something I made up couple of months ago. The hand needs a bit of re-working. What do you think?
Where is the image?
yeah looks pretty bland…:krazy: :krazy: :krazy: :krazy: :krazy: :krazy: :krazy:
Thanks for the indepth critique. But your overuse of emoticons was appreciated.
Well it looks quite flat- the linework doesnt define the shape as well as it should 
Could you offer some suggestions please.:}
try some cell shading and make the outer line of the character black 
shadows and highlights:)
varying stroke widths as well. Not a bad start but it needs massaging
Yeah, I think I need to thicken and round the lines a bit. They look a tad too sharp. There does need to be some more shades and lighting on it. What did you exactly mean by cell shade? ( I feel dumb by asking this question)
kindaq flat, no shadows or gradients
Stroke weights and more detailing… Well actually a lot more detailing… Especially near the stomach and around the head… Give appropriately detailed highlights to the fins as well.
The pre-sketch is very proportionate though, except for that hand 
:lol:
Cell shading is like shading with solids
Hmmm… What is shading with liquids and gases called?
why must you laugh at me.
