Just a beginner - so be nice

talk design
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http://www.5renterprises.com

I am a Criminal Justice major with way too much time on my hands :slight_smile: let me know what you think!
Thanks

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hey krish… nice to see you here =)

well… i already gave you my opinion :P…

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ha - that was fast… and yes you did already give me your opinion - thank you very much :slight_smile:

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Here are the things I noticed:

  1. I can see that the site is trying to sell pecans, but how does the color scheme relate to that? Or how does it help sell pecans? As of right now I don’t think your layout or color scheme goes well with the type of product the site is trying to sell.

  2. As for the design, I think it’s a bit too busy and some of the text and graphics are a bit blurry so you might want to look into that.

  3. I also noticed that you have a html version as well, but I didn’t notice it until after I went through the flash version. I think it would be better if you created a splash page for this site and gave the viewer the choice of whether going to the flash version or html version there so they don’t have to go through the flash version first.

  4. Also you should work on creating smoother transitions between each section so it looks smoother.

That’s about it, I hope those comments will help, good luck. =)