Layout Check and Critique Please

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This is just a layout, no preloaders, no plug-in check and I need some harsh critique please. Tell me what you like and what you don’t like.

To quote the client: “. . . a high speed computer and X-Box gaming center. . . Counter Strike tournaments or Halo tournaments”.

~65K

http://www.flashvacuum.com/netstryke/

Thanks in advance! :slight_smile:

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quite nice.
You’ve lost some quality on your images. Might want to check that out because its very visible.

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Very true, the “silver dragon” is from an Illustrator drawing and then imported into Swift3D. I probably should spend the time to draw it in Swift3D (I already put 6 hours into this second prototype).

The boxes are from Photoshop and I will redo those when approved.

Thanks very much! :slight_smile:

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With nothing showing that the site was loading, I had no idea there was anything on the site until it was fully loaded. I have a 56K connection, so that’s why it was slower to load.

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Sorry about that, that’s why I posted that it had no preloaders and was about 65KB.

I share your dial-up pain, I connect at 36K most of the time! :*(

So what were your thoughts on it? Thanks.

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Well, a person having a screen resolution of 800X600 is going to have to side scroll to view all of your imformation. However, I have a feeling your target audience is going to have a big enough screen resolution. You should use Netstryke in your title tag instead of main.

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yeah, our survey showed that more than 80% had 1024 or greater

yeah, title tag, it’s just a temp site for the client to approve

I’ll post again this weekend after I make drastic changes!

thanks spufi! :slight_smile: