Logo critique

This is an assignment for stickers to be placed on the back windshield of a couple of lifeguard pickup trucks. Before I submit,
what do the Kirupians think?

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woot! I like it!

I think there is too much space above the wave. And the wave does not quite look like a wave. Looks like a curved spike. Although I love the concept it needs a lil TLC. Also make the circle more of an oval to add to the effect also exaggerate the wave a bit…Maybe add a couple of shades of blue to the wave also. Man I have some seriously cool ideas running thru my head for your logo…why cant I do that when i am designing my logos …

yeah i like it, agree with DDD on space…

my eyes were screaming for the text to be inside the circle…

but i like it!

Ok… I think I got it… 1 vs. 2 ?

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ok but the logo should be pretty big for ppl to be able to read it now… :-\ :smirk:

Grrrrrr… This is true…hmmmm

Unfortunately I gotta use one colour…
Okay, first off which font?

And do I need to stick it back up top?

mind if I take a crack at your logo?

what program are you using also? Does it have to be one color?

lol jay… yur avatar is perfect for this situation! :stuck_out_tongue:

3d… he said he has to use one color (-:

maybe use the first version but just make the wave abit bigger… I dunno :smirk:

Go for it DDD…:thumb:

I am using a very rare program called PhotoShop 7.0 :puzzle:

I am at work, so Freehand is out of reach…

Syko… Your site is cool !!

DDD… What prog did you use for the liquid metal?

huh?..oh my splash? Swift 3d v3…

No way ! Really?
Would you mind telling me briefly how you accomplished that in Swift? Also, where are some good tuts for Swift…?
Great work!

*Originally posted by jay-em *
**Syko… Your site is cool !!

DDD… What prog did you use for the liquid metal? **

lol… currently making a new one

I also love the quicksilver on 3d’s site! It’s so cool!

hhmmm…let me see if I can find the post where Iexplained how I made that…it is going to be changing soon.

Well i ran out of time (off to a meeting) so I did not finish fully…Here is what I slapped together…I know it aint the best, but maybe it will give you an idea. I can shoot you my ai file if you want.

Very Cool ! Yes the file would be great. Thanks DDD :hr:

On your logo:

Does the logo without the text, say the message it is intended to say? I looks like a wave is crashing down on a some guy, doesn’t nessesarily say lifeguard to everyone

Is the logo transferable to all mediums , big and small. If there is to much detail in the dood then he will look like a blob if it is photocopied small (so will the text). It must recognizable (somewhat) in all forms.

The above post with DDD’s version has a more interesting format, however says very little about the company (is gene a wave maker?). The logo must say EVERYTHING about the company. It is the visual representation of your identity, therefore it must stand alone without text.

On the art:

The art is good, yet I think you need to expand more on what lifeguard can be represented by. Perhaps a wave is to predictable. For instance. The logo for the lifeguards up here is a red cross with a wave like shape cutting through it. That says both medical security and the fact that it has to do with water. You have water, and a man standing under it. And a lot of people may not be able to figure out what he is holding might designate him as a lifeguard. Especially if it is printed small. The art that you have is good, but you could convey the message a little more effectively. I would pick a different font too. The blue too is a little generic, experiment.

Tip: when I am looking for colour combos I go to http://www.behr.com, and look at their colour matcher flash thingy. It is for painting houses but it still translates nicely into design.

In summary, think of the message, you are off to a good start!

Cheers

If its for a sticker then it will have some transparant bits won’t it. In which case i think its fine!

The bottom logo but the top font! then it will be all fine and dandy.

Thanks for the comments kirupians. All this “logo” will be is a vinyl sticker for the back windshield of 2 pickups. The text MUST be there for “reserved parking reasons”. There will be no problem cutting the stickers. There are two restrictions:
:: The plotter does not print, it only cuts. Therefore only one color can be used. (Unless I cut an “inlay”)

:: I am forced to choose one color.

Thanks all!!!
jMkM