Logo Design, is it any good? Be honest. ^^

[FONT=Times New Roman][SIZE=3]Hello Kirupians, I’m trying to make a logo for a culture mag called "zenit".
Would be awesome if you could critique my work so far.
Am I on to something good?

[COLOR=Black]Thanks[/COLOR][/SIZE][/FONT][COLOR=Black] /ajon[/COLOR]

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