What do you think of these logos?

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[FONT=Times New Roman][SIZE=3]Hello you all on Kirupa, I’m trying to make a logo for a culture mag called "zenit".
Would be awesome if you could tell me what you think, suggestions, critique etc.
Am I on to something?

Thanks[/SIZE][/FONT] /ajon

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