A - Wrong section 
B - “1 guy” and “team” are mutually exclusive terms…
C - Lower the bitrate of the irritating track, I didn’t know there was one until it started blasting, 5 minutes after having the site open in the background!
D - You need a title
E - Need a different typeface, wider kerning, more breathing room in content sections, and a much clearer heirarchial flow.
F - Overall I preferred the original.
