My Flash Movie

what do you guys think of it
[COLOR=#003366]http://media.putfile.com/pizza-vs-straweberry[/COLOR]
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http://media.putfile.com/pizza-vs-strawberry-2

euh?

*confused

lol, you got blammed:)

u got blammed :stare: :lol:

hahaha :lol:
(Nothing personal, but lol);

Yikes! You really didn’t get any love did you? :slight_smile:

LMAO @ NG users comments :smiley:

what’s blammed?

I think its something like when all users who review the movie hates it or something :confused:

ok i uploaded it to putfile

http://media.putfile.com/pizza-vs-straweberry

http://media.putfile.com/pizza-vs-strawberry-2

this should be posted on newgrounds not kirupa. i dont like it.

^ ha shows you the level of newgrounds animations…
I’m so over people who do really shotty work - and still call themselves animators. Stiff movement, no timing, spacing, expression…

Geez :frowning:

:stuck_out_tongue:

That’s totally unrealistic! First of all, Pizza would NOT be punked out like that from a Strawberry! Secondly, Pizza wouldn’t get revenge with a gun, pizza has no arms, legs or hands to use said gun.
And where is this clock coming from? Watching that movie I didn’t really believe that the clock was emoting enough, you need some more emotion from pizza clock and strawberry clock. Also, you really should have your actors show a little more emotion, I didn’t believe that there was legitimate anger between pizza and strawberry. Create some history between the two, maybe through a love triangle between a pizza, strawberry and I don’t know…a hot dog bun.
Why would a pizza or strawberry need to use a clock? They don’t need to know what time it is, the only thing they need to know is that when I am hungry I will eat them if they are put in front of me.
If there was anything that wasn’t in that video but should have been included it is a hungry me looking to chow down on the competitors.

Moral of that movie is:

Don’t f*** with a hungry The Pete One!

Nice dark. I have to agree. its not very well put together and animation isnt very smooth. Work on a story and animation workings a tad more. There are many tutorials or ask dark hes quite good with animation.

//edit, wow pete you really just got on a role there lol.

HAHAHAH pete u pwned him good :P-
and thanks temp- it’s very true a lot of “animators” never put time into their work and the end product is just cow patties…

thanks for the suggestions. im still learning, but this is a major step up from my stick figure movie crap.

:slight_smile: learn the fundamentals before u even start making animations :stuck_out_tongue:
My first animation was on paper- http://darkmotion.com/pasquale_superfly.mov :smiley:

alright i will learn

the reason its not smooth is because I don’t know how much frames i need for a certain action, so i either put too much or too little.

EDIT: im still trying to learn how to get dfferent color backgrounds for different frames. thats why it was the same color the whole time

set urself @ 24/25 fps.

Make sure u plan out ur keyframes (extremes), then plot your inbetween frames (this is all frame by frame). Inbetweens should sit halfway between both extremes, and the the position of the object moving (if not easing) needs to be half way between you extremes.

thanks for giving me that tip, it made my animations much smoother

example
http://img115.imageshack.us/my.php?image=itstucktrick9re.swf