Pagethirteen.com/

Hey, check out my site… be kind, it’s my first flash site…

-P.

http://www.pagethirteen.com/

this site is really nice, and really well done. I like your Illustrations in your portfolio. Some real talent here… :slight_smile:

Goog work.
I like your backgrounds.

why don,t you make the buttons a little bigger or give them something behind so they can be easier to read.

Just my opinion
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It,s my first post:x

Welcome to the forums, Mr. R.:slight_smile:

Just because it’s your first post doesn’t mean you don’t have helpfull feedback to give to others. =)

p13: nice job, Im not going to say it is anything crazy, but as you stated it is your first flash site. It has good images, simple eye pleasing design as well, and you’ve put a twist on popular layouts making it slightly different, but still applealing to those that like current trends. I agree with Mr. R - although I would do even more with the buttons… .the simplicity of the site would work well with some more vibrant buttons (more animation/interation) I think… look at SOTW winners or other design sites to get the creative juices flowing. One more suggestion that I think would really improve the feel is to loose the pop-up… just have it load in the main window… I think it would look a lot better, and stop from annoying those that hate pop-ups :wink:

Peace

Wow, cool portfolio! I really like the illustration of that pink bunny. :A+:

*Originally posted by Ryall *
…One more suggestion that I think would really improve the feel is to loose the pop-up… just have it load in the main window… I think it would look a lot better, and stop from annoying those that hate pop-ups…

That’s not technically a pop-up, it just opens in a new browser window… Thanks for your imput though! And thanks to everyone for your comments! Much appreciated…

-P.