Pls critique my site

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Need comments/critique to improve my site :slight_smile:

http://www20.brinkster.com/thybalt/index.htm

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Coolā€¦canā€™t wait to see the rest of the content.

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Love it. Soundtrack is cool. Love that falling intro. canā€™t wait for intro tooā€¦ change the font on the loading part. also the logo on the first page looks funny. it kinda blury

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thanks for the comments, will keep them in mind! i am planning to change the logo because i will its very trendwhore too with the arrow and stuff. i couldnā€™t help using it when i started making it

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Visually, I love the site.

But personally, the ā€œpopupā€ style Flash gets on my nervesā€¦
I brought up the link, hit ā€œenterā€ and a movie pops up that I have to drag upward to view.

Now, if you like the ā€œpopupā€ style, then keep it. Thatā€™s cool, but I would consider making it ALL fit inside the screen.

Or, use the same Flash work in the same windowā€¦

Good Job!!

:-\

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thanks JMK I did realise that you need to drag it up a bit because thereā€™s still a little toolbar in the window which i canā€™t get rid off, probably i used the wrong popup code. may considered just dumping the flash in the same window too tho

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Anytime thyā€¦
Again, great work and stay on it !:crazy:

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looks good. i would keep the arrow. seems to really work for the typography, especially the liquid design font. the tech look is in because itā€™s visually appealing. if it really bothers you, i would suggest some other wingding type character to replace it.
flash animation is great, but a siteā€™s design is what makes a strong impact on the viewer and potential clients.
thatā€™s my 2 cents.

nick
vaguemediagroup.com

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thank you vaguemedia for the suggestions =)

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very nice keep flashing!

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nice work mate, iā€™ll comment when you get some more parts finished, everything looks fine at the moment. great work. :slight_smile:

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I like it :slight_smile: I noticed this very unimportant ā€˜bugā€™: the ā€˜craterā€™ your logo makes when smashing on the ground, is back straightened some time later. I know, itā€™s very minor ā€¦ :slight_smile:

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Thanks soulty and vendi. i know itā€™s like 10% complete without any real content in any of the sections so iā€™ll try to do myself some justice by putting stuff up there soon, and also to you guys so its easier to critique.

Voetsjoeba youā€™re very observant, I didnā€™t notice that the crater filled itself up! Iā€™ll fix that when I update it thanks :beam:

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  • I see <%@LANGUAGE=ā€œJAVASCRIPTā€ CODEPAGE=ā€œ1252ā€%> in the upper left corner of your intro screen. I donā€™t think you want that!
  • Navigation should be ā€˜on rolloverā€™ not ā€˜on clickā€™. It will make it easier for people.
  • Should be able to turn off monotonous music somehow.
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thanks supree

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no, keep on release. Theres a rollover effect and some people like to go through the menus without selecting something.

  • i agree with a turn off music button.